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Poetry Corner

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by cjdogger, Jun 19, 2009.

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  1. kamage

    kamage Well-Known Member

    Did you spend hours attempting to get that right?
     
    kamage, Jun 25, 2009
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  2. Born2killx

    Born2killx Well-Known Member

    30 seconds.
     
    Born2killx, Jun 25, 2009
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  3. cjdogger

    cjdogger Guest

    B2K is quite smart
    Just pointing out the obvious :DD
     
    cjdogger, Jun 25, 2009
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  4. Loonylion

    Loonylion Administrator Staff Member

    And the understatement of the week award goes to... :p
     
    Loonylion, Jun 25, 2009
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  5. dedboy

    dedboy Guest

    A slit in the cosmos
    to bring you home
    a great attraction leaves me alone
    you embrace the darkness
    I live in the light
    will I die for you
    will you lose your life


    will we be or will we suffer
    will we continue to fall away from each other
    will I lose you to eternity
    Can I give you hope,or at least a kidney
    Is this the end of what never started
    I miss you already and yet you haven't departed


    Carry yourself to the place I lost you
    carry yourself to the place I lost myself
    when this time loving you has become hazardous to my health
    will you be my poison my lovely affliction
    my needle in my arm my sickness my addiction
    come to my arms emptiness is hollow
    embrace my light,my darling we can die tomorrow.

    Man some of these sound just plain weird. Maybe I need help, or one of Mario's 'shrooms ;D
     
    dedboy, Jun 25, 2009
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