Write poems? post them here!

if you write poetry or songs or anything post them here!
rules:
1.don't copy other ppl work(you can quote them tho)
2.no trolling<be serious>
3.rapping does not count
4.otherwise go nuts!

 

I know nhi has some pretty good poems, I , however do not.


P.S.Pretty sure this is in the wrong section, believe this goes in "Sports and Hobbies"

 

I wrote a rather gruesome one on Hell, rather not post it here, but i'll give away the first verse:

Hell - An Introduction

Welcome to Hell.
There is no escape.
We'll throw you in a cell
and hang you by the nape.

Believe me, its got a lot more gore than that.

 

oooo plz continue!

 

But rap IS poetry!

 

in a way you are right but that was back then and im refering to the new crap that is now

 

I personally think modern Persian rap is still poetic. Just, you know, filled with political turmoil and such.

I'd post a few of my poems, but... Well, do any of you guys know Abu Nuwas?

 

Now? Wait, let's see. Jay Z is crap? Kanye West is crap? Eminem's more substantial work is crap? No. A lot of the songs, or if you're too sensitive, raps, they do are as much poetry as Robert Frost's. It's a bit more blunt, literal, yes. But it's also figurative and very clever if you dissect em.

On topic.

Flash Photography

From my mind to your dream, Your reality is what I see
From a million miles away, I relive your one faithful day
On the beach, atop a tree, eating nuggets, reading ABC
How film taints the mind, memories unfold, played back in rewind
What is your temptation, Vision infused in utter emotion
I see what you feel, or is it the other way around the reel
Do you show me, or do I make of what it is I see
Exposure, Emotion, Develop me, Flash Photography

That's legit. Check it. http://www.facebook.com/dan.cubangay

 

No, I am not going to give away the next verses of Hell. It might provoke the admins, and it is way too long, still got a lot of errors and a bit of it doesn't make sense. Still, I might release it later on.

But I am writing another horrible one about murder. Not that I'm an emo or anything. I just like graphical poems
And yes, I will be releasing this one. In full.

 

okay, ill give you that, they are awesome!
but i mean like the old stuff that is not that famous any more like common or mos def or nas...
those guys were serious poets man!
i dont mean to dis anyone who likes them but i don't think new rappers like travis porter,gucci,and any other rapper that just
raps about getting money, drugs and "bitches" are considered in the "good" category.....srry

 

Oh yes. Hands down. I'm missing Makavelli. And yes. I agree with you. Now I know what you mean by the "Rappers of now", talking about sex and killing people.

 

great now that we got to and under standing,STOP TROLLIN'!

 

I ain't trollin now.

LEFT FOR DEAD
http://dannycubs.multiply.com

Stand alone in the city a lonely stranger goes about
Within his grasp a soul goes crazy his sanity without
His lover has left him laying there his heart on his sleeve
Took with her all his reason, all his love, all that he believes

He is barely breathing, his heart pumps out air
No longer does he bleed, no longer does he care
If he could see her now, he'd run to california
Wake up in her bed, and sleep into insomnia

Holding unto what he can, he wishes for redemption
In another's hands, he knows there is salvation
With stars eye shot, he cries to the skies
Left for dead, A lonely stranger lies

Skeleton, down on the ground
He's breathing, his bones make a sound
With words on his tongue
His heart on his sleeves
He's breathing, but barely
without her

2 PM, June 5th
ORIGINAL

 

I wanna be the very first,
like no one ever saw,

...

I'll beat you and you'll beat me!

RomUmon!

...

 

WTF!? ...troll? ???
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here's is one of my own that i wrote as a poem version of a song i wrote earlier on.
it's free verse.
its called:
the difference between you and i is life and death

she makes me sick.
so sick, i could puke
to spit out the things
that remind me of her.
the lies,
the lies I've been told.
that bullshit that's been fed to me,
I'm physically abused at the thought of it!
so, STOP IT!
as i became calm,
i went to the place were we first met,
to try to remember the good parts
but, that's just it...
there were none
so, now i sit
stabling myself of the toilet
dazed and confused
glancing at blurred porcelin and glass
as i fall, grasping and gasping
as i grabbed for plastic drappings
that now, i cant see
losing breath
as my last thought
was your face...

~kirowashi~
10/22/09

any thoughts on this one? ???

 

We
Are
Right

 

thanks for mentioning me~





these are some of works, two or three dont have titles, they were my first ones
soo..
yeah.. this is my original set of poetry... most are depressing.. and like.. 2-3 are love poems

okay.. so there are 2 love poems.. i was bored on the friday before valentines.. so i just wrote...
lol.. i remember the day..

 

...you live in Fort Bonifacio? Me too. o_o


I write poems, but nothing I'm comfortable sharing.

 

lol epic! ;D