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Wrath of Elchen

Discussion in 'Forum Games, Jokes & Random' started by athemoe, Apr 5, 2012.

  1. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

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    A thousand years have passed since the Great War. Life went slowly back to normal in the kingdom of Elity. The rivalry between the Giants and the Elves disappeared and was replaced by friendship. But there are rumours that a child with red hair was born in the troops of the Giants. According to an old legend, a child with red hair will be born. Red stands for courage and bravery, but also for blood. He will make an end to the peace and he will destroy the empire of the elves. Somewhere in a small civilized village named Kinbride in the Fogsneke forest, a child like this was born...


    I don't want to write more, since I think it would be better if we create the story together. copy/paste the form below, submit your character and join the adventure!


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    [b]New character[/b]
    
    
    [b]Name:[/b]
    [b]Gender:[/b]
    [b]Age:[/b]
    [b]Race:[/b]
    [b]Appearance:[/b]
    [b]Personality:[/b]
    [b]Specialty:[/b]
    [b]Extra notes:[/b]
    



    I'll start.


    New character


    Name: Fauna Rune (nickname Fa)
    Gender: Female
    Age: 17
    Race: Wood Elf
    Appearance:
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    Personality: social, adventurous, naive
    Specialty: Fa is good at calming people down
    Extra notes: She was born in Aldcester
     
  2. j c 2000

    j c 2000 Well-Known Member

    Name: Cerdic Soul-Blandun nickname(Sola)
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Race: Giant/Elf hybrid [is it allowed?]
    Appearance: 9'8ft tall Reddish Black curls Tanned skin etc
    Personality: timid, mild-mannered , cunning
    Specialty: Natural born fighter and leader
    Extra notes: Father was a giant. Mother was a elf
     
  3. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    Off character: yeah ofc

    "Fauna? Fauna are you awake?"
    * sunbeams are slowly moving over Fauna's face

    * Fauna moans and slowly opens her eyes
    "wh-whazzup?"
    * she was staring at a tall blonde boy who's smiling at her

    "Wake up Fa! We have to collect some berries for breakfast."
    "Yeah I know, just give me some time to get ready."

    Fauna jumps out of her bed and changes her clothes.
     
  4. Myxa

    Myxa New Member

    (so this is an RP?)
    New character


    Name:Enihyit Kilthimor
    Gender:Male
    Age:rougly 125
    Race:Elf/Drow
    Appearance:kinda like a male version of my avi
    Personality:Somewhat serious, have a thirst for magic and knowledge
    Specialty:Magic, Alchemy, has some experience with the blade
    Extra notes:Accompanying him is a humanculus by the name of Hilwa, she is quite energetic and known to be seductive, shes quite livily to be with even though she has no soul. Has the twin blade of Exitor, passed down in his bloodline, these blades are said to hold a hidden power, but so for no one had unleashed it, hor what sectret hold withing them, however they are quite sharp, so they were used as an efficient weapon.

    Enihyit was reading in the library again, reading the 'Alchemy for dummies' book with an unpleasing expression upon him.

    Hilwa come to hug him from behind, whilst he was sitting, "Grettings young master why may I ask are you reading such nonsense? Your knownledge will decompose for reading such a book"

    Enihyit twitched "How many time have i told you not to call me master, and futher more whats with the 'young' im more than 100 years older than you, and if you must know why am i reading such a book, i wish to see if the knowledge for the next generation of alchemist is efficent, i must say i am displeased" he said as he turn the page in the next page he noticed a serial number 'FR673' "Whats this? seems somebody had hand-witten this"

    "FR? the forbidden section?"Hilwa asked

    "ive been in the forbidden section once in my entire life, in order to go to the forbidden section you must gain permission from Galthurum, the king, come we must make leave"

    "do you wish to do to the forbidden section for that book? or do you seek that we have our privacy?"she said as she rubbed his chest while he was still seated

    he stood up making the chair push her slightly "Stop your foolishness" he turn around and a sweat drop developed from the back of his head "why are you in a librarians attire?"

    "What? I heard man love a woman in uniform"she stroke a pose as saying so.

    "*sigh*, please do not tell me you have killed the lirarian?"he stated

    "no i merely gagged her and stuffed her in a closet, I also tore her garments for fun, i must say she was delicous, after having fun with her i also put a sign that read 'rape me'"she smiled

    "....*twitch X 3*ok we will get her out then see the king"enihyit said rubbing his forehead.
     
  5. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    New character


    Name: Deanne Lunarcrest (Nickname Lu)
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Race: Half Human Half Elf
    Appearance:
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    Personality:Calm, Swift, likes to hunt
    Specialty:Power of the Moon, Unbelievable bow skills
    Extra notes:Born in Fresjna Lu's family and race had died down now all that is left is her and her little Brother, their family was once know as the Moon's Wind
    for generations their family has been defending against the giants until the great peace and eventually their whole race was almost annihilated, In their Race only the main branch and the Secondary Branch held the power of the moon and who is left is Lu or...

    "My dear brother its time to wake up dusk is near"
    "Is it time to go?"

    "Yes we have to move during the where the power of the moon is strong we have to protect ourselves afterall"
    "Ok where are we going next sister?"

    "The Nearest forest is Aldcester its home to wood elves I'm sure they'll welcome other fellow elves there"
    "Sister are we ever gonna find "Him"?"

    "I dont know..."

    Lu and his brother heads toward Aldcester
     
  6. Devon

    Devon Well-Known Member

    New character


    Name: Gilrir Devonshire Ragnarok
    Gender: Male
    Age: eons
    Race: Ascendir
    Appearance: Dark grey skin, white hair, white braided beard, giant sized
    Personality: Malevolent
    Specialty: Can transform into a centaur or a horse, can use forbidden healing magic that drains lifeforce from one being to the other.
    Extra notes: Ascendir are giants with magical powers that were sealed by the elves into Bloodstones during the wars. Ascendir also speak the older tongue of the giants, that the new generation of giants can barely comprehend.


    [OCC]I want my character to be introduced by another, send me a PM when you want to introduce me.
     
  7. Myxa

    Myxa New Member

    (ooc:^it it wasn't for the fact hes a giant id say the discribtion is that of a drow...appearance wise that is)

    A few hours later, after getting the real librarian out and having erased her memory, Enihyit and Hilwa reached the kings court.

    "King Galthurum, an honor to meet you!"Enihyit claim as he kneeled, Hilwa did not, but Enihyit put a spell on her that made her kneel.

    "Raise Alchemist Enihyit, its been over 20 years if memory serves, how fare you?"Galthurum said

    Enihyit rose "i am honored that you remember me, I am but a commoner."he said Hilwa also got from the floor and whispered "i kneel to no one but you master...and while im down there maybe ill give you a treat <3.", Enihyit whispered back "Quite im speaking to the king now"

    "A commoner? By bloos, yes, but your reputation, and knowledge is that of noble-born, even greater than noble-born".the king answered "My memory may not be of prime, but i always remember those whom leave a strong impression".the king said

    "You praise me too much milord" Enihyit said "Hilwa muttered "i don't think he praised you enough"

    "let us see if my memory serves me correct again, last time we had met you had ask me for permission"the king said

    "yes, well about that...i come here for the same reason..."enihyit said as he explained the situation more thoroughly.

    (to be continued)
     
  8. koolenergy

    koolenergy Well-Known Member

    New character


    Name: Cladyus Verison
    Gender: Male
    Age: 625
    Race: Eseion
    Appearance:Light brown skin, dark brown eyes, grey hair and a white beardstache around the size of a regular human
    Personality: Intellectual
    Specialty:Summoning,Dark Magic and Alchemy
    Extra notes: Eseions are energy beings capable of giving themselves a human form and summon Aeons and enable to transmute creatures through alchemy, Eseions are like drifters they were hired during the great war of the giants and the elves but there are very few of them

    *Rings the bell of the counter of the library*
    -ding-

    "Yes, can I help you?"
    "Yes, I have deposited a book here before I would like to retrieve it please"
    "Very well can i ask the Serials of the number?"

    "Ah yes i believe it was FR673 Entitle Alchemy for Dummies"
    "Alright please wait a moment...."
    "I'm sorry sir it seems that someone had burrowed the book, strange I dont remember anything about getting it burrowed and there was no name left behind, I'm deeply sorry"

    "(This is bad how can anyone be able to burrow a book from the Forbidden Section)I see... (I just hope that who ever burrowed will not be able to decoded it)"
     
  9. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    "W-wait! Not so fast!"
    Fauna runs to the Big Tree and gasps for breath.

    Alvin, a tall blonde boy and also Fa's best friend, laughs.
    "We won't be on time for breakfast if you are that slow, Fa."

    Fauna walks to Alvin and softly slaps him.
    "The last one at Lake Floria is a rotten egg!"

    Fauna laughingly starts to run as fast as possible, leaving a speechless Alvin behind.
     
  10. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    "Lio(Short For his brother's name which is Helios) can you keep going?"
    "Yes... i can still run"

    "Ok let's keep going just a bit more there is a nearby lake just up ahead"
    "Ok let's go"

    -The two siblings head for the Lake called Floria-
     
  11. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    Fauna reached Lake Floria and jumped for joy.
    "Haha, I win!"

    She looks into the distance, but she can't see Alvin.
    And he said I was slow.. Ah well, I'll wait for that slowpoke then.
    Fauna goes to the edge of the lake and sits down, waiting for her best friend.
     
  12. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    "Ok let's stop were here let's have a quick rest"

    "huh? Lio where are you LIIIOOOO?!(Where is he!!)"


    -Lu looks for her brother, after awhile she see's an elf at the other side and Lu approaches her-
     
  13. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    Fauna sighs.
    What is taking him so long? Did something happen?
    Nah, I must be exaggerating. He is strong enough to defend himself.
    I think I should search for him though, we still haven't got any berries.

    Fauna stood up slowly, noticing a human girl - or was it an elf as well? - approaching her.

    Huh? Who's this?

    "Can I help you? You look lost."
     
  14. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    "Hello there, I'm Looking for my brother he's small with a red hair
     
  15. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    Fauna smiles in a friendly way.
    "No, I haven't, but I'm sure he'll be ok.
    I lost my friend as well, maybe we should search for them together?"

    Red hair? That's rather rare. I've never even seen someone with red hair.
    could it be...? Nah, that's just an old stupid legend, everyone knows that legends aren't real.


    Fauna reached out her hand.
    "By the way, my name is Fauna, but you can call me Fa."
     
  16. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    "That's a great Idea! I think its best I went with you anyways since you know this place more than I do right?"

    She seems to be thinking about something ever since i told about my brother
     
  17. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    Fauna pulls back her hand.
    How rude

    "Yeah, we should go to Aldcester, my friend might be there.
    And maybe we'll find your brother on the way home.

    What's your name?"
     
  18. Stanley Richards

    Stanley Richards Well-Known Member

    New character


    Name: Kryjhe Sibroe (Alternate name: Kryre Sibroe)
    Gender: M
    Age: Unknown
    Race: Pseudo-Daemon
    Appearance: Kryjhe takes the form of many. In post-war songs, he is described as a bearded man in rags or a lizaroid with a cane. In either variant, he always has a symbol on his forehead; a ring with two swords piercing it diagonally.
    Personality: Pre-war songs describe him as a compassionate warrior who thought of justice. His personality is never mentioned in post-war books, possibly due to the fact that he has not appeared since the Great War.
    Lore:

    From the books of Hawkeye the Ever-seer, son of Desiree the Untainted, the first female warrior to fight in the Kranjian Wars two hundred years prior to the Great War.

    "Kryre saw in man not impotence; he saw in man's actions what was impotence.
    And so he thought to himself, Man; the ever so powerful being with powerless action; their mind show piety but their action lack devotion. "

    In this, people thought that Kryjhe was not a man but a higher being entirely. However, many people have also chosen to believe the scornful text written by Clarskye Forgani which was unfortunately published at around the same time as Hawkeye's work. It was better received as Clarskye's writing was easier to understand for most people, and made a lot more sense.

    "Kryjhe arrived in the village of Nyan on the fifth day of what Historians call The Atheism Movement. It was not a movement per-se. It was actually a particular week where everyone in the world just started believing that there isn't a higher being watching over us all. Kryjhe performed another one of his oh-so-spectacular miracles in front of a fountain where a crowd had gathered; not to watch him and all his glory, but to kill him. He was surrounded by the blood-hungry villagers who attacked him mercilessly with rakes and knives. They expected him to live through that but he was declared dead by the village doctor.

    Realizing that they had just indeed killed a man and not a god, they buried him in a tomb under the wine cellar of the village tavern. Three weeks later, the Chief of the village died, though it had nothing to do with the death of Kryjhe."

    Hawkeye had read this and sent a revised work which talked about this matter in greater detail. It had a notable quote that nearly started a war.

    "True it may be that the body of the great Kryre had been buried under deep rubble under a brothel. However, people fail to realize that the tomb in which Chief Stein was buried in was in fact the tomb that was to have held Kryre."

    The whole of Etily then knew. Clarskye and the village had hidden the truth from the rest of the world. Clarskye countered by calling Hawkeye a liar, and that it was impossible for him to have known this. He then proceeded to insult every believer of Kryjhre. This resulted in a declaration of war by both sides; those who believed in Kryjhre, and those who didn't.

    However, the war never happened. On the day of the battle, both Clarskye and Hawkeye turned up dead in the centre of the would-be battlefield. Most believe that Kryjhre had murdered the two to prevent the war, but others speculate that it was merely an assassin working for a different organization who didn't want their work compromised by a war. To the believers, this incident is known as "The Prevention", to the non-believers, it's known as "The Delay".

    It was at this time that the Giants started growing in power. Kryjhe had laid low and only appeared once after the "The Prevention", and that was to end a conflict between the Humans and the Lizaroids, which is how people have come to depict him as either a Human or Lizaroid.

    These are only a few of the many feats that Kryjhe accomplished prior to the Great War. His fame diminished after the Great War and only a small group of people known as "The Last Hope" still worship him to this day. Most of the songs on Kryjhe now only exist as satire.



    He will play a prominent role in the story once it has developed far enough. For now, think of him as a previously worshipped God. Create your non-essential characters based on his legacy or something, I dunno. Maybe throw in a few bad guys who worship him and stuff. Go crazy, I don't care.
     
  19. Kyrie-Pyon

    Kyrie-Pyon Well-Known Member

    [OoC]Whoa^
    I'm Deanne but you can call me Lu (better not say my last name), Alright let's head fir Aldcester
     
  20. Myxa

    Myxa New Member

    After getting permission Enihyit and Hilwa had returned to the library, even though the librarian had her memory erased she was scared of Hilwa for reason she did not know. But she gave the requested book, by its cover alone Enihyit knew it was no ordinary book. "The book of Elchan?...I thought that was but a childish prophecy...maybe there is some anwer to this 'prophecy'" he opened the book, he tried reading for one hour and gasped "i don't believe my eyes!" he claimed

    "What is it?Hilwa asked

    "Not only is this book coded and incrypted, but it is also is in the old tongue!"

    "the old tongue?" hilwa asked

    "Yes, about 500 years or so people used to speak a certain language, almost everybody knew it, however, over time the langauge somehow died out over 200 years ago, now-a-days barely any of the new generations know of the old tongue let alone understand it."

    "what about you?"She asked

    "i only understand simple terms and such, however the letters have been arranged in a certain pattern, the real message will only appear it you reorganize the letters, furthur more i manged to only decode the very first sentence, its in poem verse, it reads 'Tis fear that strike the time of the new undesired beggining.' "he said

    "you have read for an entire hour JUST to decode that? Have you decifured it?"she asked

    "hmm i think when it says : 'new begging' it mean the end an old begging, maybe our present perhaps, as for the undisred part and the fear, from that sentence i would guess, if one knew of a future it did not like or 'desire', one would naturally do everything in their power to prevent it, out of fear that is, but in doing so...their actions in trying to prevent that future, is exactly what caused it to happen, to strike the time." he said

    "hmm not good, if it took you an hour just to decode and decifur just that, then we have a problem. what will we do?"she asked

    "at first i merely got this book out of courosity, but know we must find out what is written in this book, my suggestion is that we first find someone who can understand the old tongue, decoding it should prove easy enough know that i know the arrangements."he claimed as they got up, they casted another spell on the librarian so that she would forget they had 'borrowed' a book, and they took it with them outside.