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The Flytanic (Made when I was bored with some friends)

Once upon a time there were a boy and a girl who were fascinated by the Titanic. They saw the movie so they wanted to look for it. So they grabbed their backpacks and hired a boat and sailed to the place where they thought the Titanic was. When they arrived they saw the Titanic glowing and flying. So they gave the ship a new name “The Flytanic”.
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They climbed aboard the ship and saw creatures inside the ship. They were shocked when they saw the creatures but the creatures were also shocked from them. The boy and the girl ran away to hide, so did the creatures. But when they were brave enough to go to the creatures, they found out that the creatures were actually really nice. The creatures gave the boy and the girl a cup of tea and a hamburger. The boy and the girl wanted to see what’s inside the storage room of the ship. The creatures have never been in the storage room because they were scared. So the boy and the girl got 2 flashlights and 2 flares to warn the creatures if there was any danger.

They went inside the storage room and found something that they weren’t expecting. It was a photo with the crew of the Flytanic, then they found a diary. They started reading it, but inside the diary was a shocking story. The creatures weren’t so nice as they seemed to be. The crew of the Flytanic wrote in the diary that the creatures are bloodthirsty monsters. The boy and the girl saw that they were preparing a kettle to cook the boy and the girl. The boy and the girl were shocked and started to make a plan to escape from the boat.

The boy and the girl were smart and knew that the ship has some weapons on board, so they started looking for those weapons. They found some crates with weapons in it and a bomb with the instructions. They sneaked up on a creature and kidnapped him and forced him to tell who their boss was. The creature said nothing and committed suicide. The boy and the girl went to place a bomb inside the ship so the creatures will never come back. They placed a bomb using the instructions and ran out of the ship, they shot every creature who was standing in their way.

They jumped inside a life raft and started to peddle far away from the ship. When they were on a safe distance they made the bomb explode. But a few creatures escaped from the ship and swam to the boy and the girl. The boy and the girl were scared and shot the creatures. The whole sea was covered with green liquid that came out of the creatures, but the battle wasn’t over yet.

The boss of the creatures had survived the explosion. The boy and the girl had to fight the final battle with it. They found a crate nearby filled with weapons and grabbed a few guns and a knife. The boss of the creatures was flying to the boy and the girl. The boy and the girl had to find it’s weak point, they saw a wound in his stomach and started to shoot at it while it was flying. It screamed in pain and started to make weird noises.

The boss of the creatures made fake replicas of himself so the boy and the girl would get confused. But the boy and the girl had very good eyes. The boss of the creatures had the word “boss” written on his forehead so they knew that he was the real one. They continued to shoot at his stomach while the green liquid was still coming out of his stomach. Green drops of liquid were falling on the boy’s head and his body started to feel weird.

The girl was panicking and grabbed a jetpack out of the crate to bring the boy to the hospital. She used the map in the crate while flying in the air to see where the hospital was. They were lucky because the hospital was nearby on an abandoned island.

When they arrived at the abandoned island they saw weird creatures coming out of the hospital. They looked similar to the creatures of the Flytanic. The creatures started to attack the boy and the girl. The boy and the girl ran away from the creatures into the woods of the abandoned island. There they found a car and decided to drive the car, they drove too fast and….

Suddenly, a sign popped out of nowhere.
“To be Continued” was written on it.

CUT! The director said.

 

its very good

 

ooh gives me orgasm every time

 

tl;dr

 

that was sick
....(keep up the good work!)

 

Cool story, bro.

 

un-fucking-believeable

(to honest the story is kind of wish-washy if you desribed it more thoroughly it could become a good novel, but good job anyways!)

 

nope, not a chance. this thing has more plot holes than the titanic, cwutididthar?

 

well the order is titanic>treasure island>pirate of the caribean with hansel and gretal elements>resident evil>mission impossible>dead island

 

what?

 

the theme of the story i mean lol

hey do you mind if i post my story here?

 

ok how about this story, please tell me your opinion:

Introductionsthis is the introduction to my novel/book im writing. there are ALOT of mistakes but bear with me)

Aftermath
Our journey had finally ended, with blood stand hands we defeated the Masiks . We stood in the huge meeting room, as it lied silent, with only the sound of dripping of blood coming from our hands, weapons, and the corpsus that leid all over the floor. We looked down in our reddening reflection, as the blood began to flood the room, the sound of the blood become louder, almost echoing in the room. Upon looking at Susmikos’ eyes, it got colder along side with the blood, it seemed hers eyes were losing their color, I did not like it.
The Masiks, a group that was made over 3000 years ago, a group that had the purpose of keeping the secrets of the portal, realms, and the races; thus keeping peace. However, the Masiks turned into a power-hungry, bloodthirsty organization, that was planning on using the secrets they were meant to keep, to create war. Peace, however, was not our only objective in stopping and killing the Masiks; we all got involved for different reasons, some for vengeance, some for glory, for their sense of justice, for the sense of adventure and excitement, and even for freedom.
Our journey had lasted alittle over a year, to think that I had not know all about the masiks and the realms. Over 3000 years ago, 4 races used to coexist: humans, at the time they were considered primitive, although they had advanced greatly since then, and we humans will continue to advance; animals, beast who are not very intelligent, and cannot speak; Myth, although many look like humans, like vampires, elves, werewolves and etc., these strange beast, have more than enough intelligence to speak, some even have their own language, some were once human; Magics, although originally humans, this greatly advanced race, have abilities, unlike those of human or myths. Orignally they all lived in one realm, the realm known as ‘Earth’; however, human at the time, although were consider weak and primitive, their ambitions and union-ship made them, formidable foes, with our everlasting thirst for power and blood, the magic and myths knew the humans were dangerous.

Thus the leaders of the three races: humans, myth, and magics, had created a group called the Masiks. The Masiks first task was to have the magics create three different realms, one for Magics, which was named H uluss; one for Myths, which was later called Jurei; and another to act as a neutral zone, called Seiloom. The magics created the realms with great difficulty, and also the portals that lead to the realms. Some human helped with the construction of the portals, some were forced too, like the portals in Egpyt known as the ‘pyrimids’. After the completion the myth took the portal to travel to Jurei, the magics left to Huluss, leaving Earth to humans and animal, of course some animals and creatures left to other realms, for being too dangerous to humans and animals, and/or also had magical abilities, like phonixs, dragons, cerbiruses, and etc. The Masiks had agreed to have a court built in Seiloom, in order to prevent war, the masik had to destroy, hide, and/or seal portals away; however, they knew they need a few in order to keep in touch. As the years passed the portals were forgotten by the common civilians of the the four realms, however, those who know about the realms were to take advantage of its use, the Masiks, although powerful, were but a few member, 12 members, 4 human, 4 myth, and 4 magic representatives; in order to keep up with the many people teleporting in and out of the realms using the portals, the Masiks had no choice but to become an organization, with the 12 leaders as the consel members. They hired many people from different realms to deal with trouble. However, the oganzation, over time, become coppurt, not only do they stop the crimals, but now the leaders of the masik sends troops, for information, bribes, assassaination and other things.

As I was thinking about all this in the room, Anna had broken the silence amongst us, “We finally did it! We defeated the Masiks! Everybody should be rejoicing, but I think I speak for everyone here….the problem is just starting, what will we do with the people?”, she asked. The other members looked at each other “The reason I’m not rejoicing is not the fact that I care what happens to the people or the realms, I lost someone important, but I guess that doesn’t matter now, nothing can bring her back. As for the people…I say we tell them!” Katy claimed. “Some of us also lost someone important, yet we must push on, however, I don’t think it will be a good idea to tell the people, I mean what kinda reaction will have should they know?” Gerik spoke, Anne replied “Most likely the same reaction we had when we found out about all this, I’m not sure if I wanted all this!”; “Ah but, if you hadn’t then me and you, no all of us, would have never had met!”Nyre said. The group began to murmur. “Dispite all this, the people have the right to know!” Susmiko said, I saw color returning to her eyes, I smiled at her. “I’m not sure, couldn’t we leave everything the way it is?”Hanuid asked, “I agree, with all the confusion and the lack of proof, the people may becaome suspiscious”Ionna added. “Lack of proof? Aren’t we proof enough? Listen if we don’t tell people they might find out eventually, and mix the story to make us look like the criminals; also some people might take advantage of this and gain power, possible continue what the Masiks planned to start.” Sonya said, she really was master Hikashis’ granddaughter. Israel spoke “ok then its settled, in no longer allowed to interfere, but I will give you this advise before my leave, Everyone separate into three groups of three each one must go back into their original realms, gather as many people as possible, then come back here” he said; Liliane announced “I will explain everything, when you all reach, good luck to all of you.”.

The entire group went to the portal room in the complex, there were three portals, I spoke “Remember the plan, gather as many people as you can, randevou at the Sekirin Plains” everyone nodded. I had to admit I was a bit disappointed that I had to separate from Susmiko for a time, she looked at me as if to till me ‘Don’t worry we will meet again!’. We separated into three groups of three: me, Sonya, and Katy were to go to Earth; Gerik, Susmiko, and Nyre were to go to Jurei; Hanuid, Anna, and Ionna were to go to Huluss. Upon going through, the portal I returned to Earth, near my home town, I looked around and couldn’t help but to remember how this all began, our journey, our quest, our destiny…our legacy.

Aurthor notes: The introduction takes place AFTER the finally chapter(but around the same time and before the epilogue) , hence the title ‘aftermath’, chapter 1 will start from the very beginning, I tried to explain as much as possple without giving away too much, and although I did give out a lot of information, I left out a lot to question. Hopefully when you read the rest of the book, you will understand exactly what is going on.