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Project Business

Discussion in 'The Graphics Guild' started by athemoe, May 12, 2011.

  1. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    I had to made a poster for a random event. (for school: business/marketing)
    I made one for a huge party :)

    I just want to know your opinion.
    thanks in advance

    No trolling please.

    oh yeah, I nearly forgot. I wiped my name, just in case :)
    nobody has to know my true name.

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  2. Loonylion

    Loonylion Administrator Staff Member

    the @ and euro symbols are a bit too distorted. I would also put spaces before the colons, because they are run into the preceding words as they are.
     
  3. lewis9191

    lewis9191 Well-Known Member

    I think all the writing is a bit distorted, have you put shadow on or something
     
  4. awesomebros

    awesomebros Well-Known Member

    I think the glow should be a bit stronger, they don't seem bright enough for a neon theme.
     
  5. Paddette

    Paddette Well-Known Member

    The text is a little distorted. I always find using one font in bold and normal works really well if you place them right. Nice clean lines.
     
  6. ace1o1

    ace1o1 Well-Known Member

    To be honest, the text hurts my eyes when I try to read it and like stated previously, the words/colons are distorted.

    I like the lady, the cocktail, and everything else though.
     
  7. Suiseiseki

    Suiseiseki Well-Known Member

    Drop the glow effect from all the text except "NEON PARTY DELUXE". Those are the more vital details, so it's better to make them easier to read at a quick glance.
     
  8. Stanley Richards

    Stanley Richards Well-Known Member

    Does it start with C and end with E?
     
  9. xallized

    xallized Member

    there's just too much of everything. no focal point whatsoever and i don't know if it's just me but i didn't pay attention to the text at all. the simpler the better. i do like the font for neon party deluxe.
     
  10. athemoe

    athemoe Well-Known Member

    shht