‘’Erin, Erin’’! ‘’Erin Alexander Russell if you don’t wake up right now’’! ‘’Mom I’m up’’. ‘’Besides it’s only Friday why do I need to get up so early’’? “Don’t you remember� It’s your last day of school, it isn’t everyday my son wins the Student of the year award. ‘’Yeah your right it is not , just every year’’. ‘’Bye be down in five Erin’’. My mom has a funny way of ignoring everything I say it kind of make feel invisible like a small fish in a big ocean. Thoughts?
I can't tell if you're serious (20 minutes for a paragraph?!), since it's so short. But yeah; Grammar errors, odd formatting (which I'll attribute to the forum), and quite a few punctuation errors.
