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Hey... I made a New Poem... and an awesome PEN NAME

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by kamage, Jun 22, 2008.

  1. kamage

    kamage Well-Known Member

    Red
    By:Lito Rastu(My pen name? Get it, if you don't, say it fast, and what word it sounds like :). It’s that or Lito Jastro)

    What secrets will you utter tonight
    or will your moribund wish bring you to light?
    Greetings, to all you literary ghosts
    patiently haunting old reams of text.

    Buried stories speak from every page
    whispering loudly throughout the age.
    Shall we kiss the lips of a princess
    burning forever in eternal flames of love?

    Or perhaps tonight we’ll explore the stars,
    or inhabit ageless scrolls stored in clay jars.
    Your stories are way more intoxicating
    than my fueling bouts of imagination.

    It’s your ancient wisdom that I find
    wafting into my superfluous mind.
    Come now, my faithful friends, and fill me up
    for I wish to feast upon your words.
     
  2. questXtreme

    questXtreme Active Member

    Wow,its good!I don't really understand since I'm not a poetic person,but this kind of work,is something that I can't ever come up with. :p
    By the way."sounds lime"?I don't get it.
     
  3. anandjones

    anandjones Well-Known Member

    That's a well written poem. Last bit is the best. (Anand writes it down for local poetry comp, not plagiarism..)
     
  4. Reemr

    Reemr Well-Known Member

    Another good pen name is "The Yellow Dart" (Homestar Runner reference)\
    Nice poem
     
  5. ultra

    ultra Guest

    we should celebrate! and i think the best way is for the site to give us all 500 free points!
     
  6. Loonylion

    Loonylion Administrator Staff Member

    And I don't :)
     
  7. kamage

    kamage Well-Known Member

    I thought someone would atleast point out that Lito Ratsu sounds like Literature :p
     
  8. Born2killx

    Born2killx Well-Known Member

    I thought it sounded like how a Japanese person would pronounce Little Rats. :p Bad me. :p