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first sig, please rate

Discussion in 'The Graphics Guild' started by jevejo777, Apr 20, 2009.

  1. jevejo777

    jevejo777 Well-Known Member

    Here is my first sig, please don't be nice and say what's wrong so i can work on it.

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    UPDATE:

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    edited the metroid render.
     
  2. Loonylion

    Loonylion Administrator Staff Member

    the background is a bit plain, the metroid render could have been cut out a lot better, and the name text is very difficult to read. Plus the whole thing looks too busy.
     
  3. equitypetey

    equitypetey Well-Known Member

    i would have to say the same and that the white bit needs to be transparent and a border would be good to have
     
  4. jevejo777

    jevejo777 Well-Known Member

    in the original pic the white is transperant but i think it changed when saved

    cutting out renders is on of my biggest problems, i'm a linux user (ubuntu) and i only use gimp, and i haven't found any tutorial yet about cutting renders.
     
  5. cjdogger

    cjdogger Guest

    3/10 is the rating I would give
    The renders weren't cut out very well and the background is terrible, also think about where you place stuff, borders and text placement, another thing is: Less can be more
     
  6. equitypetey

    equitypetey Well-Known Member

    you need to save in .gif or.png for transparency
     
  7. Almo

    Almo Well-Known Member

    This is probably going to hurt....

    Firstly if you are new at making sigs then you shouldn't be cutting renders yourself, find a renders site (planetrenders is good) and download your renders from there untill you have had enough practice and followed enough tutorials.

    Im an ubuntu user too, although I dont use GIMP (it confuses the shit outta me) im sure there is some sort of 'pen tool' for vector cutting renders. Perhaps a few tutorials will point you in the right direction.

    On to the sig...

    firstly the white piece that is susposed to be transparent should be transparent, save as .PNG next time.

    second, you have 4 different renders, none of which are related in anyway, furthermore the 3 renders on the left are dull and blurred, the focal point (if you could call it that) is actually the mario render, you dont even see the other three. Your eye is drawn strait to the mario render which is badly cut, blurred, has some sort of weird stroke (unless thats just super bad cutting) and is completely out of place.

    third, the text is horrid, bad font, bad placement and pretty much unreadable. It has no contrast to the background and is also probably too big.

    forth, the sig on a whole looks much too busy, the background however looks way too plain. Solid blue fill? even chuck norris could do a solid blue fill in MS paint. Try something a little more complicated and appealing. Even a gradient would have been better than a solid fill.
     
  8. equitypetey

    equitypetey Well-Known Member

    you said it would hurt? you went easy on him by your standards there almo :p
     
  9. Born2killx

    Born2killx Well-Known Member

    White doesn't equal transparent. The alpha value of the pixel defines the transparency. Making it white would make it perceivably transparent only on a white background.

    See the example of text on a blue background in this Wikipedia article.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transparency_(graphic)

    Note: In editing programs, transparency is denoted by gray checkers.
     
  10. Almo

    Almo Well-Known Member

    I thought the transparency issue was because he had saved the images as jpeg which dont support true transparency, however having checked the image type I can see he saved as .png.

    As B2K just said, white doesn't equal transparent.
     
  11. jevejo777

    jevejo777 Well-Known Member

    in gimp it was transparent, really, but i think i have forgotten to set the transparent on

    i've maked some other pics, i have looked at your commentary and have tried to make some new.

    you can see them in my portofolio