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Calling all poets

Discussion in 'Hobbies' started by dedboy, Sep 18, 2010.

  1. dedboy

    dedboy Guest

    This thread is for poems. Yep, poems. If you have one post it, allow the uses to see your daft wordplay and spectacular speech craft skills.

    Some rules-
    **Keep the profanity to a minimum, the less the better.
    **Sexual innuendos should be left somewhere else.
    **Don't bash or flame someone's poetry.
    **Critiquing is allowed, only constructive criticism though.
    **Don't plagiarize some one elses work and claim it for your own.


    " No Umbrella"
    It's nothing I wanted to tell you
    the cascading moments fleeing into the past
    I never knew you wanted to know,
    and I never dreamed you'd ever ask.

    So the questions revolve around a moment
    the one that echoes why
    at that time I was enveloped in misery
    and in the bed of thorns is where I would lie,

    I no longer question it
    I had this answer,already known
    at that very moment
    miles away,the princess took her throne.


    It's sappy, but so am I.
     
  2. Cahos Rahne Veloza

    Cahos Rahne Veloza The Fart Awakens

    Time to dig up my old thread post then....

     
  3. ace1o1

    ace1o1 Well-Known Member

    "Wasabi"

    Wasabi.

    I hate it.
     
  4. dedboy

    dedboy Guest

    I never knew you had poets blood man. Child makes you feel as though you're in that position.
    And I am honored your the first follow up poster.

    "Fog Warning" Dr.J

    My missing piece of the puzzle,you fit so perfectly into place,
    yet I know I can't keep you against the turmoil I face
    longing and needing your breath against mine
    and the light from your face.

    I echo a distant time long ago,when holding hands was romantic
    now a days the kids go straight to sex,like love is fanatic
    I can't change the fact,I love the warmth of holding you close
    and know I miss you the most

    all this time I waited against the grain
    hoping that that time would come
    but I'm alone in the rain,
    my shield,my umbrella,you protected me against the storm
    I walk against the night fog,beaten and worn.
     
  5. Cahos Rahne Veloza

    Cahos Rahne Veloza The Fart Awakens

     
  6. dedboy

    dedboy Guest

     
  7. j c 2000

    j c 2000 Well-Known Member

    Post Merge: [time]1284855414[/time]
     
  8. personuser

    personuser Well-Known Member

    This won me the State-wide poetry contest in fifth grade, against up to sixth graders.

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    had to censor the newspaper article. On places like this you can't be reveaqling your personal I.D.

    The picture's old and blurred, though so I'm not worried about that.
     
  9. Cahos Rahne Veloza

    Cahos Rahne Veloza The Fart Awakens

    Wow that's fantastic personuser :)
     
  10. personuser

    personuser Well-Known Member

    Heh, I always liked that one. Plus the fact that our teacher made the entire class write basically the same poem/theme, and mine was the only one that even got past the first round. Other kids stole lines off of mine too.

    Anyrate, all the poetry here is great.
     
  11. Cahos Rahne Veloza

    Cahos Rahne Veloza The Fart Awakens

    Dug up three more from my "Emo days" archives :)

    Perplexed

    By: C.R.V

    The future for me has not yet concluded,
    Have not I for see what lies before me?
    On the winding road to prosperity;
    Success & familiarity,
    Achievement of one's most noble goal;
    Attainment of familiarity,
    Familiarity against prejudice;
    Prejudice against reality,
    Reality against imagery;
    Imagery close to one's Individuality.
    Ideals kept within one's mind & soul,
    Kept there to inspire & adore;
    Fancying bravery,
    Bravery to summon courage.

    But what of a future when courage is barren?
    Meaningless & senseless.. that what lurks there!

    Wishful

    By: C.R.V.

    I wish it would be....

    ... A war filled with insanity!
    Then things wouldn't hurt;
    everything just explodes, blood just squirt.
    Within my chest is hurting,
    As my heart has been broken!

    I Wish it would be...

    ...The end of all Humanity!
    Then there'll be no more life to live;
    No love, no joy, nothing to give,
    Then I need not act as if I am happy,
    as my soul is left empty.

    But why should it be...

    ...A Life so good & happy;
    For them, 'tis a life to be cherished,
    To me, its all meaningless & gloomy.

    It haunts deep in my heart,
    Of things I never should have felt....

    Wishful version 2

    By: C.R.V.

    I wish I could be...

    ... A Horse so wild & free;
    A Racing stallion,
    Beloved racing champion.
    To them I'll never go wrong,
    All bets for them I'd have won!

    I wish I could be...

    ...An Albatross crossing countless seas!
    Covering long distances, flying freely,
    Embraced by the winds, bound not actually,
    Seeking new places, new counties,
    Whenever my former oppresses & hinders me.

    But why should I be...

    ... A man surrounded by animosity;
    For me things no longer matter,
    I'm merely society's lesser,
    I seek not, merely as I tire,
    cursed is my life, none any better!
     
  12. version3

    version3 Is actually KappaMikey in the internet

    A poetry thread? Oh snap.

    This is actually a song, but I'm too lazy to put the melody in.

    Count Your Sheep

    Don't you think real life's just fantasy.
    And it seems you're just another me.
    Listen up, but don't believe in what you hear.
    Just go to sleep, you don't need to count to 3.

    For everything you wanted, there's a price to pay.
    And if your life's just wasted, just let it end today.
    Start the fires and run now, and never will I say.
    And if you really want to go to sleep.
    Just close your eyes and don't forget to count your sheep.


    And another one.

    Y.O.U.

    It starts with M,
    It ends with E.
    It's me!

    Did you ever wonder,
    Why life seems to stop and stare.
    And did you ever notice,
    That your friends were never there.

    Have you ever found things,
    Were not the way they're supposed to be.
    And did they ever tell you,
    That it's not meant for you to see.

    You walk around in this broken circle of life,
    You talk this talk, but you never seem to get it right.

    All the change in the world,
    All the pacts of the past,
    All the gifts of today,
    It starts with Y,
    It ends with U,
    It's you!
     
  13. hugo_rrs

    hugo_rrs New Member

    Would you just listen and please don’t say a word, just yet,
    I’d like you to think back to the very first time we met,
    How you felt around me? The memories we shared,
    And just remember that once upon a time, you really cared.

    Now think about how we parted, and how much I cried,
    But please don’t speak, remember that I never ever lied,
    That I told you the honest truth about why we were to split,
    But now I’d like you to know that my heart broke bit by bit.

    The pain was deep, unbearable and painful, for so many years,
    I’ll never forget all the sadness, all the uncontrollable tears,
    Slowly I am rebuilding my life, I am content with what I’ve got,
    And although it is hard I am beginning to forget what I have not.

    You were a special part of my life that I will never forget,
    A part of my life that broke my heart, but that I don’t regret,
    You gave me some happy memories that I’ll keep in my heart,
    Although sometimes I wish that you and I didn’t have to part.

    You were my first love and my true love, that will always be so,
    After all of the heartache, sadness and never ending pain, I know,
    You and I had something special and that will never change,
    Because I love you and loving someone else will always seem strange.

    Would you just listen and please don’t say a word, not ever,
    I’d like you to remember that once upon a time, we said forever,
    That I had hopes and dreams, that I was the one who threw them away,
    And this is something I will always regret until my dying day.

    © Tara-Kay Randall 4th June 2007
     
  14. dedboy

    dedboy Guest

    Now that one, I must admit, hit a nerve on me. Damn good work Mr. Randall

    [E]- Here's a new one-

    "Silver" Dr.J

    Stay in these shadows,call them formal wear
    Stay in silence,create your own universal tear
    better to shun,than to accept
    but I tell you this,it's a move you'll regret

    From where I sit,I see through you
    Your wounds fester and even hurts me too
    before your doors shut,you're close to being a mistress
    but you shut down?,can we not do business?

    I can beat around the bush,but i'd rather drive up the middle
    and I won't lie,I want to drink from you,just a little
    slip away,only if it's into my arms
    Snap,only if it's to that which does you harm

    Do you even understand,truthfully I think not
    I'd rather have you straight,but i'll enjoy you on the rocks
    pain,sorrow,sickness,and the like
    will you dance with this devil,under the pale moonlight?

    Put your gun to my life,true it won't fire
    put your body against mine,and let your sickness become my desire.